The challenge Make Believe #5B

The challenge Make Believe #5B

Oof. A two parter. Definitely not copying BFDIA. Wow. Just wow. Long description

published on October 1810 reads 6 readers 9 not completed
Chapter 1.

The race continues

-Evale
Axis: Who's the person who woke me from my nap.
Akari: That's unimportant.
Axis: It's important to me.
Angel: SHUT UP! Don't you see Team nameless passed us. And who knows where potatoes are.

-Potatoes
CrazyBob: 99 bottles of beer on the wall, 99 bottles of beer. Take one down and pass it around, 98 bottles of beer on the wall. 98 bottles of beer on the wall, 98 bot...
Max: SHUT THE F#CK UP!
*silence*
Kiri: About how much longer.
Sliver: I say about 7,995 miles
Kiri: You mean we only gone 5 miles.
Sliver: Yup...
BlueFirey: this sucks.

-Nameless
Jaz: Haha, now we're ahead.
Bluebird: Can we go any faster.
Jaz: Not unless we lose some weight in here.
Aiz-Lynn: I got this... *Pushes Kayla out of helicopter*
Phoenix: WHAT WAS THAT FOR.
Aiz-Lynn: She was dead weight.
Phoenix: WE CAN'T WIN UNLESS WE HAVE ALL TEAM MEMBERS. You know what that means.
Aiz-Lynn: Uuuuummm,..
Phoenix: WE NEED TO FLY DOWN AND GET HER! Jaz, fly down.
Jaz: Got it

-Evale
Angel: Take this wrench and start hitting things. Hopefully we can get the car to start working.
Miki: Hit things? *smacks Axis with wrench*
Axis: Owww...
Miki: Hahaha
Angel: FIX THE D#MN CAR! and where is Akari.
Akari: Relaxing, enjoying the sun.
Angel: YOU BETTER HELP US!
Akari: NO!

-Potatoes
Max: This possible couldn't be going any worse.
Kiri: Oh it could be worse. At least It's not..,
*starts raining*
Kiri: Raining.
Max:F#CK THIS
CrazyBob: I LUV THE RAIN!
Max: No one asked you, you possitive freak.

-Nameless
Jaz: Kayla, you alright.
Kayla: Definitely fine. Not like I was just pushed out of a helicopter or anything.
Aiz-Lynn: I regret nothing.
Kayla: B#TCH! LET ME SLAP YOU!

-Evale
Miki: It's hopeless. We aren't getting this van fixed.
Angel: Guess we'll use the back up van I have.
Miki: YOU HAD THAT THE WHOLE TIME, WE DIDN'T NEED TO WASTE TIME FIXING THIS,
Angel: huh, guess so.
Miki: Lets just stop wasting time and get going.

-Potatoes
Sliver: Something just hit me.
Kiri: What.
Sliver: We're heading to the north pole, right?
Max: Yes.
Sliver: It's an ocean. There is nothing we can do.
Max:.....
*Everyone steps back*
Max: F#CK!  
Kiri: Calm down.
Max: DON'T TELL ME TO CALM DOWN! I'M ON A TEAM OF MORONS! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANY MORE.

-Nameless
Jaz: Okay guys, we're over the ocean now. DO NOT PUSH ANYONE OFF!
Kayla: *cough* Aiz-Lynn *cough*
Aiz-Lynn: I'm sorry. But it was pretty funny.
Kayla: I'm so going to kill you in your sleep.
Aiz-Lynn: Wow
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NetherWorks
I have nothing to say
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Derpyderpjuice
@Starlight_the_crusader
You better not be pushing people out of helicopters
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Derpyderpjuice
@Starlight_the_crusader
Me too
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NetherWorks
Im too scared to ride one =>
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FireSpark56
I like this one
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Derpyderpjuice
Thx
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FireSpark56
your welcome
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Derpyderpjuice
Oofy oofer

Still not done
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