Lost (5)

Lost (5)

Four teens with the powers of the Elements (check out my quiz!) are accidentally transported to a whole new world! There, they must split according to their powers. But can they? Will they? Find out in this epic story with lots of twists and turns!

published on March 30, 201523 reads 11 readers 51 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologue

Hi. I'm Fern. I guess that you probably want to know more about me, since you took the time to pick up this book. Or maybe you're reading it online, and you just had to click some buttons. It doesn't matter.
I'm Jenny Fern Swiss, but my friends call me Fern. Actually, everyone does. I guess that it fits me better.
I'm Jenny Fern Swiss, and I have no clue how to write a story.
I'm the only one left. I have to write this. The world NEEDS to know. But how do I tell them? I'm not sure. I guess that I'll just have to keep writing and hope that whatever I end up with will be enough. So I apologize beforehand for leaving out details, getting sidetracked (which I have a tendency to do), and whatever other weird or stupid mistakes that I will probably make in the progress of writing this thing. I'm not a great writer, which you probably already know.
But that's enough about me. I'm probably boring you to death. So, here's the story...
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AnimeCae28
I sorta left qfeast for a while, but I see that you never did the remake for you story. Just not feeling it?
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AnimeCae28
*finished
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Lucky_Queen
For the rest of today. I get my bed back tonight!!
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on February 20
AnimeCae28
how long will they be staying? (not to be nose-ey)
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on February 20
Lucky_Queen
Very.
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on February 20
AnimeCae28
that must be quite annoying..
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on February 20
Lucky_Queen
My cousins are visiting, and the stole my room. A bunch of mattresses and stuff have been shoved around and added to the room so that I can no longer reach my computer. I'm on my mobile now.
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on February 20
AnimeCae28
what happened with your computer\?
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on February 20
Lucky_Queen
XD Yeah

Ill work on it as soon as I get my computer back.
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on February 20
AnimeCae28
hah I I'm very persistent but I'm not gonna force you lolz
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on February 20
Lucky_Queen
I pretty much just forgot about it... >.< I can't believe that you're still asking about it.
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AnimeCae28
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Lucky_Queen
XD You like it?
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Lucky_Queen
OK! ^_^
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on January 21
AnimeCae28
yeah! see? the show (or should I say book) must go on!! you have a croud to please now!! Go, go!!
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on January 21
Lucky_Queen
0-0 125? Whoa...
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on January 21
AnimeCae28
you should! I mean, you already have 125 reads!! you must please the croud, the show must go on! (or whatever you those people say)
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Lucky_Queen
EXACTLY

Even I can't wait to keep writing! ^_^ Maybe I'll update soon.
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on January 21
AnimeCae28
and please exuse my bad spelling, I TERRIBLE lolz
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on January 21
AnimeCae28
Yeah! I'm exited! the way Fern said that she was the only one left, its leaves ya thinking...
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Lucky_Queen
XD Thanks. >.< You really like it?
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on January 21
AnimeCae28
Hey! you're really re-writing it! cool!! well, good luck! actually, I don't think you need the good luck with the BAD-ASS WRITING SKILLZ!!!! lolz I'm a werdo...
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Lucky_Queen
XD Yeah.
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on January 06
AnimeCae28
wat really?? HAHAH lolz !!! ok then SUPER cool!!
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on January 06
Lucky_Queen
XD No I might actually do that.
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on January 06
AnimeCae28
Lolz JK!!
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on January 06
AnimeCae28
really? ok then cool! the new title should be like "Lost...In Another World... NEW AND IMPROVED!!!! =P
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on January 06
Lucky_Queen
Maybe I'll work on more, if you really think that it's good. It's going to go through some major editing processes, though.
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on January 06
AnimeCae28
wat? so u abandoned it ! nooooo !! (even to I'm on like, the 3rd chapter)
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on January 06
Lucky_Queen
I worked on it for a few months. Never finished it, though.
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on January 06
Lucky_Queen
XD

I wrote this a LOOOONNG time ago. I don't really like it...
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AnimeCae28
srsly tho, it must have taken you A LOOOOOONG time !!
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on January 06
AnimeCae28
no I don't like it, I LOVE IT ! Dang gurl you have MAD writing skills !!
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The_Rose_Gamer
I WANNA MAKE MY OWN OC FOR THIS IT SOO GOOOOOD
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Lucky_Queen
Seriously? Thanks!
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The_Rose_Gamer
No problem but it will take lost of work
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on November 27, 2015
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The_Rose_Gamer
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on November 26, 2015
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on November 26, 2015
Alex_CookieCat48
Thank you for adding Skyler! Ps I really like the series!!!
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Lucky_Queen
NP! Glad you like it!
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on May 23, 2015
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Crazy_fangirl_of_Harley_Quinn
OMG I love this especially Isabelle my own character! Nice nickname for her btw
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Lucky_Queen
Glad you like it!
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on May 23, 2015
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on May 23, 2015
Maya_swan
Love it favorite character is crystal i love her personality
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Maya_swan
Kinda hard not to!
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Maya_swan
Np!
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on May 22, 2015
Lucky_Queen
OK Thanks!!
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on May 22, 2015
Maya_swan
If i think of anything i promis to pm you my idea
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on May 22, 2015
Lucky_Queen
If you have any ideas, they're welcome. I'm kind of having a writer's block for this story right now.
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Lucky_Queen
Glad you like it!
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on May 22, 2015
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AnimatronicHeart
Awesome story!
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on May 10, 2015
Warrior_Fangirl
Do Not Quit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Lucky_Queen
OK!
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on May 07, 2015
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