What if..?

What if..?

What if you had a time limit tattooed onto your skin? What if you only had a month to live, watching the timer on your skin slowly count down your time to live? What if you found the love of your life..?

published on June 02, 201656 reads 22 readers 52 not completed
Chapter 1.

One Month

One month. That's all I had left.
One month.
One month to live the rest of my life.
I looked at the black timer on my wrist. Seven hundred twenty nine hours and thirty minutes to be exact. Slowly the black ink changed. Seven hundred twenty hours and twenty nine minutes. I felt my heart get heavy. It's not fair. Why do we have to live like this? Innocent people were dropping dead left and right because they ran out of Time. We didn't ask for this. A soft knock echoed through my room.
"What do you want Eric?" I asked my little brother as he opened the door. His shaggy brown hair was sticking in every direction, his usually wide and happy green eyes were now bloody shot and droopy. "I had a nightmare.." He said in his soft voice, I sighed and scooted to the other side of the bed. "Come on." I said as I patted the bed, he smiled as he closed the door and skipped over to the bed. He placed his bear on the bed and hoisted himself on the bed, with my help of course. He was only eight years old, and he had one hundred seventy five thousand two hundred hours and five minutes left. Twenty years. It seems so long...but it isn't.
I looked back at Eric, he as already snuggled in the white and red blankets, holding his bear as if it was something he had to protect with his life. I sighed and laid down, my long white hair covering the blankets and pillows like a cover of snow. I held my arms out, allowing Eric to move closer, I lightly draped my arms over him and held him. My eyes slightly started to water....he smelled like mom.
Our mom died a year ago, I came home from school to find her ,what appeared to be, sleeping in her chair. But no, she wasn't asleep. She ran out of Time. "What happened to mommy?" Eric would ask every day for a month. "Where is she?" "Is she OK?" "I miss her." I had to lie to him, everyday. "She's out at the store." "She went out." "She is working late." I couldn't let him know. Unfortunately, he had chatty classmates.  
"Eric...did you go into mom's room?" I asked, his eyes, now wide, looked up into my red ones with fear. I bit my cheek when I saw tears stream down his face. "I miss mommy!" He shouted as he held onto me tighter. I felt my throat tighten up. "Hey..I miss her too.." I said as I ran my fingers through his hair, my gaze ended up on my wrist, which only made me feel worse. I can't leave him here alone. I can't just leave him. "Eric....want some ice cream?" I asked, he looked up at me, rubbed his eyes and nose, and nodded. I picked him up and walked to the door. "Mr. Snuggles!" Eric shouted as he reached out to the bed, I smiled as I walked back to the bed and leaned down, Eric happily grabbed the last thing our mother gave him and nodded. "OK." He said, as if he commanded me. I shook my head smiling. So innocent. So young.
"Vanilla, oorr-" Before I finished, Eric jumped up and down. "Chocolate! Chocolate!" He shouted, I placed my hand on his head and lightly put some force, making him stop jumping around. "We have people living underneath us, shh." I said as I placed my finger up to my lips, his own lips curled up as he mocked the 'Shh'. I grabbed two black hexagon bowls and brought out the vanilla and chocolate ice cream. "Topping?" I asked, he pointed to the chocolate syrup. I smiled and rolled my eyes as I grabbed the strawberry and chocolate syrup. "You, Mr, need to cut down on the chocolate." I said as I scooped up the chocolate ice cream and plopped in one of the bowls, covered it in syrup, and handed it to him. "Whaat? Cut down? But this is the first chocolate thing I had this week!" Eric said as he shoved the spoon through the ice cream, hitting the tip on the spoon against the bowl making a loud sound.
"Oh yeah? Then what's with the Hershey bar wrappers I found in your room?" I asked as I plopped two big spoon fulls of vanilla ice cream in the bowl then dressing it in the strawberry syrup. I placed the bowl on the table and put the ice cream away along with the syrup. "Your ice cream looks like you!" Eric said as I sat down and scooped up a little of it. "Eh? I guess your right." I said as I placed the cold sweet dessert in my mouth. Eric cringed and made a face. "Vanilla is gross." He said, I giggled and placed another spoon full in my mouth. "Mmmm, vanilla~" I said, making him scrunch up his nose in disgust.
I smiled as he, somehow, got chocolate all over his face. "Eric, you have to be more careful." I said as I got a paper towel and started cleaning his face. "Oi, sit still." I said to the squirming eight year old. "Nevvveeerrr!" He shouted, I shook my head and chuckled. Damn this kid, if only you weren't so cute. After cleaning the bowls and Eric, I carried him back to his room. "Tuck me in?" He asked, I nodded and started to tuck him in. "Snug, as a bug, in a rug." I said, something our mom always said. He giggled as I kissed his forehead. "Wait! Mr. Snuggles want's a kiss too!" He said as he brought his bear to my face. I smiled and kissed the bears forehead, then retucked him in. "Goodnight, Eric." I said as I left him room, taking a glance at him.
"Love you..."
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Lord_Of_Cake
GET YO PALE ASS BACK HERE AND UPDATE THIS MOFO
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on May 09
Lord_Of_Cake
*cough* update please *cough*
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on February 15
Lord_Of_Cake
*coughs* Excuse me but update this shit because it is amazing and don't you dare change a word because it is perfect
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Tomatoes
eh....it is?
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Tomatoes
I'll update it then~
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on January 25
Lord_Of_Cake
I was gonna read this but I was like nah Hetalia stories gotta be read because like Hetalia though and like I just read this and you need to update it
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on January 25
Tomatoes
I legit didn't think anyone liked this anymore
You actually like it?
Shocker lolol~
Anyways, want me to update it~?
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on January 25
Lord_Of_Cake
It freaking is and it made me cry, although I'm an emotional person and a lot of stuff makes me cry, update it or you will be murdered
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on January 25
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Oh
Oh goodness
Lovie it it but oh gosh
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Tomatoes
Heheh I'll take that as a complement ~
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on July 21, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
I justspent 14 minutes catching up.
And wow.
Holy crap.

I think you're doing really awesome!!
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Tomatoes
Huh? Well thanks~ I didn't know people still read it or liked it, so I stopped for a bit. It's nice to get feedback from people for stories you know?
Well if you want me to make another chapter I will gladly do it~!
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SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Glad to help
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on July 11, 2016
Tomatoes
And thanks! I haven't gotten any good feed back on this story that made me really want to continue it...but this helped~!
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on July 11, 2016
Tomatoes
There we go~
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on July 11, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Please do! I know how hard story wrighting is, but this is worth it!
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on July 11, 2016
King_of_Booty_Shorts
*mothers voice from A Day At The Park*
WHAT THE FUUUUCK
NO
NO
NOT OLIVER See More▼
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Tomatoes
...whoops?
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Tomatoes
ahaha...um...whoops~?
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on June 11, 2016
King_of_Booty_Shorts
WHAT THE FÛCK WHY?!?
YOU JUST RIPPED MY HEART FROM MY BODY!
WHY
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on June 11, 2016
Tomatoes
You'll see~ :3
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on June 11, 2016
King_of_Booty_Shorts
*grabs your collar* What are you going to do to my baby?
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on June 11, 2016
Tomatoes
...........you're not going to like the next chapter then~~~~
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on June 11, 2016
King_of_Booty_Shorts
;~; you evil son of a Romano
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on June 11, 2016
Tomatoes
eh....sorry..?
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on June 11, 2016
King_of_Booty_Shorts
OK I should be mad that I laughed harder then I should have at that XD
BUT STILL NOT OLIVER! NOT YET ;~;
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on June 11, 2016
Tomatoes
Eh.......France?
....wait I ship FrUk...that wouldn't make sense....eh, you're right~
But whooops sorry I'm killing your favorite character
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on June 11, 2016
King_of_Booty_Shorts
HES A BRITISH MAN! WHO DOESNT LOVE BRITISH PEOPLE!!??!?
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on June 11, 2016
Tomatoes
Eh? I didn't know anyone really liked Oliver that much~
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on June 11, 2016
King_of_Booty_Shorts
GOD DAMN IT YOU SOUND LIKE AN ANIME CREATOR LIKE "OH THE WHOLE FANDOMS FAVORITE CHARACTER DIED?? WHOOOOPS"
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on June 11, 2016
King_of_Booty_Shorts
You my friend
Need to continue this like there is no tomorrow
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on June 06, 2016
NyoHoHo
Was this based off of a movie??
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Tomatoes
Oh no is it? I thought I was being original D:
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on June 03, 2016
irony
This is great!
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on June 03, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
This is great! Keep writing c:
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Tomatoes
really? I didn't expect anyone to care or even read this...
Vee~! Alright I'll keep it up (=^_^=)
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on June 05, 2016
Tomatoes
How evil
Alright then~!
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on June 05, 2016
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on June 05, 2016
Tomatoes
I have a question, should the guy have the same amount of Time as the main character, or less or more?
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on June 04, 2016
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on June 03, 2016
Tomatoes
Si~!
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on June 03, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Do you like it?
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on June 03, 2016
Tomatoes
Nope~!
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on June 03, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
I'm not alone then.
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on June 03, 2016
Tomatoes
I just imagined the old cat to have a Gandalf/Dumbledore voice XD
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on June 02, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Yup, actually. My most recently updated and currently being worked most on is this one: https://www.qfeast.com/story/nCPXKn/Warrior-Cats-Burning-Stars-Book-One-Stepping-Stones
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on June 02, 2016
Tomatoes
:3 Do you have a book I could read?
(one that you made of course X3)
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on June 02, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Haha, I can relate.
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on June 02, 2016
Tomatoes
Thank you~! I was listening to Under Pressure by Queen and David Bowie and was reading the Fault In Our Stars
then Poof~ Book idea X3
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on June 02, 2016
SoulOfTheWolves_Inactive
Good! I think it has a very good story plot to it.
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