Avalon the killer

Avalon the killer

Jeff learns that lou has had children after he somehow survived jeff's killing thanks to medical care in time jeff lacks patience until doing a plan he has set out for the eldest child of the 2 siblings.

published on July 03, 201449 reads 19 readers 26 not completed
Chapter 1.
jeffs point of view the beginning

jeffs point of view the beginning

I havent been to a hospital in...a very long time.
holding you in my arms right no knowing that in 10 more years they wont have you anymore...
but by that time i promise to take care of you i will show the killer within you your gonna go far kid. i may not know your name yet but that doesnt matter even if im a cold heartless killer i will have a heart for you my neice. i will have to leave in a hour.my brother has no idea im here and since the hospitals closed tonight and theirs nurses out ready to come in here to check on you and if they see me well..its game over they would call the police and they would be looking for me again...and if your parents find that out well...i might never get to you again because of that slightest sound but dont worry...i know you wouldnt betray your uncle jeff like that. dont worry they may raise you christian due to your stubborn mom but i dont care once those 10 years finally reach i will take care of everything they turned you from i promised myself.
that i wouldnt go down without someone to be there with me except for the others heh besides i need someone to assist me in getting that bug jane off my tail too how about..we reduce the risk of me getting caught and take you to the roof. we can look up at the stars together..you never seen them before but i assure you they are pretty. they always make me feel safe for once...
*Walks to the roof*...
isnt it nice out tonight kid? it may be near december so its really cold out but i can tuck some of my jacket around your blanket...*wraps a bit of jacket around the blanket* there we go. i remember when i actually smiled for once and it wasnt the flesh i carved out of my face. i was so excited knowing i would have a neice..they say im anti-social and i probably should wait a while longer before i meet you but i dont care what they say...i wanted to be there for you and your dad for once...and atleast say happy birthday i would feel pretty heartless if i left you out there without anyone but your mom and dad to comfort you...i best be leaving now before i get caught and they notice your missing
*walks downstairs and puts in crib* there..."HEY! YOU CANT BE IN THERE!" uh oh. i best be going kid! happy birthday *smooches head* see ya in 10 years! *runs upstairs through chase scene and jumps off roof landing perfectly and runs away*
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The_Weird_Fangirl_Of_DeathNote
May I ask if that you maybe add my oc? Insane Savannah? or make her a story? I SUCK at writing XD
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on March 15, 2015
Frostgoddess
Awesome! (We really do have different views of Ben..... I always imagined him a bit older. XD Things are getting confusing)
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Vanessa_the_dark
Lolz ikr
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on July 24, 2014
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on July 23, 2014
Frostgoddess
Nice!
younger version of Kate: *peeks in*
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Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon:ewww!
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Frostgoddess
Kate: *licks lips, then grins at Avalon's reaction*
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on July 06, 2014
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on July 06, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon:um..YEAH! pretty sure
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Frostgoddess
Kate: ok. *bites into the finger*
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on July 06, 2014
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on July 06, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon:um no thanks..
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Frostgoddess
Kate: *takes a severed finger out of her pocket* You sure?
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on July 06, 2014
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on July 06, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon:no but i love drinking blood it tastes good!
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Frostgoddess
Kate: You need to try a finger! X3
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on July 06, 2014
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on July 06, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon:*rolls eyes*
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Frostgoddess
KAte: HAve you ever tasted people?
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on July 06, 2014
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on July 06, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon: O_O" ok um. i may be a sick psycho but im not canibal o.o
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Frostgoddess
Kate: *giggles*
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on July 06, 2014
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on July 06, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon:oh...(well avalon is the same age in this she currently is)
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Frostgoddess
Daddy was yummy! *grins, showing her sharp teeth*
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on July 05, 2014
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on July 05, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon:the only family i have now adays is my uncle...
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Frostgoddess
KAte: I have none. *frowns* Mommy died in a wreck, and I killed Daddy. (just a quick note, this is still a younger version of Kate XD)
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on July 05, 2014
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on July 05, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon:well it was painful...then it felt sooo good! and my uncle jeff wanted me to be like him.plus he always said hes not gonna go down alone if he goes down.
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Frostgoddess
Kate: Wow! I wish I had family here.
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on July 05, 2014
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on July 05, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
Avalon:hi! i just got caught on fire a sec ago :3
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Frostgoddess
Kate: What's it like? And why'd they do that? oOo That was uncalled for!
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on July 05, 2014
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on July 05, 2014
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on July 05, 2014
Frostgoddess
Awesome! (and that makes a lot more sense XD)
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Vanessa_the_dark
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on July 03, 2014