New hope

New hope

Violets story born a slave but escapes trying to live a normal life hiding from her evil master

published on June 12, 201427 reads 10 readers 15 not completed
Chapter 1.
Only reason of existance is work

Only reason of existance is work

crying was heard all of the sudden "Its a girl!" said a excited young man she opened her eyes and everything was blurry but she saw a white HedgeFox with blue hair and she heard her say "Im gonna name you Violet!"........
a wooden door opened as Violet came out with brown cloth for clothes and then she stood their and saw her master "Master Dairol" Her quiet voice spoke "What do you want pathetic brat?" the girl tried to hold back her sadness knowing her master never appreciated her and always called her names 'Im hungry...can i have something to eat? atleast just a little crumb of food? it doesnt matter what it is! i really dont mind! if thats ok..." she asked as kind as she could "You wont get your food until supper time you fat hog!" he smacked her with his whip and she began crying like lightning just struck her where the whip hit her as she felt a flash of a crack "AW SUCK IT UP BRAT! if you want me to like you ya gotta toughen up like your brothers! atleast they dont whine and beg me for food like you worthless self! the only reason i let your mother keep you and not sell you was so you could do work for me! that what slaves do twerp!" he yelled at her with all his might then Violet ran away crying but then again trying to hold back her tear dusk's then her masters wife came "Mistress!" She said with care "Ugh...go clean the dishes you rat! and make sure they are clean before supper! if they arent then you will be sleeping outside tonight with the cold wind blowing on you!" the woman yelled angry "Yes Mistress." she bowed then she went over and began cleaning the dishes as she saw one of her older brothers Max "Let me help you little sis you worked hard enough" He said with a sweet smile on his face then the mastr walked in shocked "YOU WILL NOT DO HER CHORES! thats for her to do if i catch you spoiling her again i will melt your head off with the fire in the fire pit outside!" he slapped Max several times with the whip "GYAAAH!" He screamed in pain "STOP! i will take his beating" Violet yelled and then sighed the end "Now your gaining bravery!" He smiled evilly he then took her and cuffed her head and hands inside a trap that only he could open and then he whipped her on the back 23 times "Gaaah!!!!" She yelled while crying intensely.
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SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
Ayumu?!?! Oh no... not him! I feel so bad for Violet right now...
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on August 19, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Ayumu..No!..Ugh Pedo (or Pedro)..I really feel for Violet
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Vanessa_the_dark
dont worry the ending will be better :3
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The_Panda_Otaku
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on June 13, 2014
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on June 13, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
That guy has no soul! And a black aura..
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on June 13, 2014
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on June 13, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Aw......
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on June 13, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
That's sad :,(
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on June 12, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Oh my God poor Violet... Layla can relate to her
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on June 12, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Thats sad...
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Vanessa_the_dark
Alright let me see... scale of 1 to 10 meter of how lazy i currently am...7 mood i am currently in...bored ALRIGHT! i should b able to squeeze it in for tonight
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SnakesVenomSans
Yay!!!! *hugz*
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on June 12, 2014
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on June 12, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
I should make another chapter either tomorrow or tonight idk depends on what mood i am in and on a scale of 1 to 10 of how lazy i feel at the moment
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SnakesVenomSans
Could you do it tonight so I can read it tonight? Tomorrow I won't be able to. ^-^
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on June 12, 2014
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on June 12, 2014
Vanessa_the_dark
yeah. but it gets better later on though! ^_^
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SnakesVenomSans
The make more ^-^
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