Is this good? (1)

Is this good? (1)

Hey so you know how you wear that cross around your neck?" The same kid who asked her if she believed in God said.
"Yeah, what's your point?" She asked
"Wanna go to church with me today." He said
"No." She replied closing her locker door
"Come on please!" He kept on begging until she finally agreed.
"Ok Michael I'll go." She went with Michael, knowing her father would be worried about her, maybe he didn't care. She cared big time, being in the house of the man who cast her father out of heaven, he was the rightful ruler of heaven and not God, he believed in humans when we believed in power.
"Eve you coming in or what." She walked over to the church and touched its walls, a man in a white robe came out and welcomed both of them to the church.
"I am Pastor Ryan." Ryan said smiling
"I am Eve." Eve replied
"Last name?" Ryan asked
"I don't have one." She answered, the Pastor wrapped an arm around her and took her to the doors of the church. The pastor opened the door and Eve stood there.
"Come on in." Eve walked in and choked on the holy spirit, she ran out and stayed away from the church.
"I'm sorry I can't be in there." Eve said
"Why not?" The pastor asked
"I did some bad things, really bad things."
"That's ok god forgives all of us."
"Not what I did." She ran away, cursing the church as she ran, when fire surrounded her and brought her to hell.
"YOU TRAITOR! YOU'RE SUPPOSE TO BE MY DAUGHTER!" Lucifer screamed
"Daddy I'm sorry, I didn't want to." She backed up away from him while he screamed.
"YOU WENT TO THE HOUSE OF THE MAN WHO SENT ME DOWN HERE! WHAT DON'T LOVE ME!"
"DAD JUST LISTEN TO ME!"
"WHAT!?" Lucifer screamed
"I didn't want to, I almost did I ran out it won't happen again I'm sorry, I didn't betray you." Lucifer hugged Eve tightly "I'm sorry you thought that dad."
"I'm sorry I yelled."

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