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Long ago there was a society that welcomed our kind, they called us the LGBT. People who hated our kind soon took over and created a separate place for us to live, the LGBT district. The government decided later on that it was too much and sent us in with everyone else, the straights. Some of them were fine with us, and some of them absolutely hated our kind, everytime we walked around they would look at us as if we were monsters, freaks, and if they were religious some would say sins.

Not everyone thought of us like that, at first the government absolutely loved us, they called us and example of pure hearts. Until one day, he took over. His name was Ragul Armon he was against our sexualities and sentenced each and every one of us to death. He tortured us one by one until we died. Not knowing some of us could keep our secret we hid, out of sight. Even some of the straight kids hid, they believed that they too could be hurt.

Thinking that they killed all us off they set a law that all society members were to be straight and love the opposite gender, if we didn't we would be trialed to death for our rebellion. They banned LGBT flags, they even made a law that if a rainbow spotted the creator would be tried for treason, my kind hid their tears as they watched him do all those horrible things. That's how our society began.

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toughwolf3
It sounds great, and I can not wait until this is published.
AngelicPhoenix
It is, on my wall
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story.writer
Awesome! Good luck.
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toughwolf3
okay! @Wolfhumanlover
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toughwolf3
oh okay @Animgame
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AngelicPhoenix
Working on chapter 1 now
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story.writer
Well, the full story isn't published yet. Only the prologue.
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story.writer
Sounds like a great concept. I will read it once it comes out.
AngelicPhoenix
It's out
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story.writer
I just saw it, lol. Reading it now!
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MusicGuy12
Honestly you should give the LBGT district a different name
It should be harsh since the government is trying to push them away
And I'm confused on how the "straights" knew people were LBGT members. Do they have a symbol on them or something?
Again, I'm confused how everyone knows who is who so how would he know who to kill unless he saw same sex couples together.
The idea is good
It reminds me of a spinoff of world war 2 with hitler and the jews with people fighting back See More▼
AngelicPhoenix
I'll get into that in the next chapter
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PorkCutletBowl
This sounds good :0
Do you have the characters set out yet :0
AngelicPhoenix
No not yet
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SpinnerFTW
Good. Great for that matter.
AngelicPhoenix
Thanks
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