Sonic oc judging (3)

Marshmallows. Eh basically leave a description of your character (I only do sonic for now but I might add on to the list later) and I will judge it on a scale of one to ten. Btw, please don't be mad with a bad grade, I'm simply giving my honest opion. And helping you fix if you think she/he is mary sue. (I'll make a form to fill out) be patient, k?

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Name: Olga Bit
Age: 20 years of age
Gender: Fluid
Species: Lundehund Chobit
Sexuality: Pansexual
Crush: In denial between Nicole the Holo-Lynx and Shadow
Powers: Mashima See More▼
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on May 02, 2016
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Name: Aranea Kamotio
Age: 25
Gender: F (female)
Species: Cat
Sexuality (optional): Straight
Crush/: None yet
Powers: Weak ice powers See More▼
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on April 30, 2016
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Critique #3

@Maryanxtailsdoll ok, imma start off with the name. Blood wing is used for villain ocs a lot. (Lyra is cute) I do however like how she has a villain name and a real one. Her age is fine. Snow leopard is unique animal (plus) She being lesbian is unique as well. No Crush pr powers is fine but, when you said she had blood wings, did you mean just for decoration or are they used for flying? If so I'd say her power would be flight. I'm not gonna take points off but See More▼
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SugarPlum
Ag OK I just love Bloodwing
Well she sometimes fly's with then for needed like to battle
on April 30, 2016
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on April 30, 2016
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Name: Zircon Veran
Age: 19
Gender: male
Species: leopard/dragon hybrid
Sexuality (optional): straight
Crush/: Borealis Light (another OC of mine)
Powers: They can only be used through his dragon form See More▼
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on April 30, 2016
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Name:Lyra blood wing (aka Dava Queen )
Age: 19 (almost 20)
Gender: female
Species: snow leopard (I don't see any)
Sexuality: (lesbian)
Crush: no one
Powers:nothing See More▼
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SugarPlum
Thanks this is my first villain
on April 30, 2016
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Chihiro_Sapphire55
on April 30, 2016
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SugarPlum
Um does villains count?
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Critique #2

@Atsuko_Maeda_15th_Acchan Japanese names are used a lot especially on qfeast lately, but it still is a nice name and it describes her just like a real canon characters name would. 11? That's new I like how she thinks of herself as to young to date. No powers, is fine not everyone in Sonic has them :3 (plus) I'm not taking points off for being an echidna because they're not that overused for ocs (as far as i know at least) and there are many on mobius so it fits in See More▼
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Chihiro_Sapphire55
Ok, that's sounds alright thanks
on April 30, 2016
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Queen_Miku
Her father's just mean. He's not had an abusive record, but he can get a little carried away when he's drunk....
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Name: Sakura Hayashi (Sakura means Cherry Blossom, and Hayashi means forest.)
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Species: Echidna (I know it's a little over-used, but I tried a less common one on Qfeast)
Sexuality (optional): Bisexual
Crush: She doesn't have a crush at the moment. She considers herself too young to date.
Powers: She has no powers, but has an admiration and passion for nature See More▼
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on April 30, 2016
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Yay my first critique!

@Kukiku_x_Shadow First off I like the name, I haven't seen it used in sonic ocs that often. Also it has a meaning so that's a plus! Her age and Species is over used. Um (just a suggestion about the species, maybe instead of just saying hedgehog, you could make her a more specific Species of hedgehog like long-eared or European hedgehog. Lol just a thought don't be mad, I still like it if you want to keep her that way. Shadow is used a lot too. Weaknesses See More▼
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on April 30, 2016
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Name: Stara Knight
Age: 14
Gender: female
Species: owl
Sexuality (optional): bi
Crush/: no one
Powers: cryokinesis See More▼
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on April 30, 2016
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on April 30, 2016
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