Toa_Bora

E nel mezzo di cammin di nostra vita,
mi ritrovai in una selva oscura,
ché la diritta via era smarrita. See More▼
If I take a quiz on italian language, does it count as cheating? XD
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7 days ago
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The first thing I wrote here is the story of my Sonic OC. It's not as good as I thought it was while writing it. I tried to make a sequel, but I totally wronged the way to do it. I wrote some battles between Sonic Ocs and canonical characters. Then school came in, occupying my time. I admit in the end I forgot about that battles thing. I tried writing then a story idea I had for years about all my favorite fandoms. But I realized I can't handle it. I came out then with this other See More▼
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8 days ago
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It's still a work in progress, but I'd really appreciate some reviews on what's in it so far.

https://www.qfeast.com/story/qX4LRO/Heirs-of-a-forgotten-world
Heirs of a forgotten world
Heirs of a forgotten world
In our days, in our time, legends that talk about fantastic creatures, magic, alchemy and mystic artifacts, are only that. Legends. Nothing more than stories, tales. But when an ancient threat returns from lands disappeared from the time, the legends must come true once again.
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9 days ago
added a new chapter to Heirs of a forgotten world
The journey begins. First steps to defeat fear?
"A sword... A young lady... A young lady with long silvery hair... He's talking but I can't hear her. What is this place? It seems like a great salon of a medieval castle. Am I dreaming? Uh? Hey! Turn the volume up, I can't hear ya."
<<Find the king... Protect him...>>
"The king? What? Who are you?"
<<Find the king. Protect him. Find me. A merlin will help you.>>
"What are you talking about?"
<<Trust the wolf. It'll guide you to the merlin.>>
"Ok, I shouldn't have eaten those berries."
<<Be q...
9 days ago
Ok, it didn't change anything. Glad it didn't.
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9 days ago
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Just noticed something I wronged on Hofw. If I fix that, do I lose the count of readers and the rest? Or does it remain the same?
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9 days ago
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Alright. "South Park: the fractured but whole" is a nice game. It has everything we love of the South Park series (as it was even for The stick of truth), a simple, intuitive but strategic gameplay and a customization way beyond the precedent game, in the look of your avatar and in the choice and combinations of superpowers. The story is full of twists and hilarious moments. The only flaw it has in my opinion is that the missions are pretty repetitive, go there, fight, come back. See More▼
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26 days ago
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Ok. Cartman is a total a*****e in "The fractured but whole".
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Corbijn3andNolly
Ah, so it’s more of a “more so” situation
28 days ago
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Toa_Bora
@Corbijn3andNolly
But he's even more ⚠sshole than ever in this game!
28 days ago
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Corbijn3andNolly
He’s always an ⚠️sshole
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Star this pic, and Sonic will protect you from Forces Spoilers
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29 days ago
5 like and I'll post the pictures of the characters of my story: Heirs of a forgotten world.
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29 days ago
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Should I draw the protagonists of my story?
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on October 18
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added a new chapter to Heirs of a forgotten world
...humankind received a grim reminder
They were blocked there. The spike almost impaled Kaylee, just another step and her flee would have ended permanently. The raging hell continued. Children screaming, people dying, killed by the brown armored men. Gunshots, explosions and crystals everywhere.
<<Kaylee! We gotta go away!>> Yelled William, but his cousin was frozen in fear.
The sky turned cyan, and a giant crystalline face showed up and then, it spoke: <<Inferior creatures.>> The voice wasn't something of this world. It penetra...
on October 17
added a new chapter to Heirs of a forgotten world
On that day...
This is the story of a man who has yet to realize his destiny

The sun was filtering through the cloth, announcing that the day had already begun. Will, back from a sleepless night, ventured out the tent yawning soundly. Bigby, the big gray wolf symbol of the city, was there, busy with running after a squirrel existing only in its dream. Chuckling after seeing such a noble animal being still a cub in the soul, he got closer to the near stream, admiring soberly the permanent eye bags on his fa...
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Look what my sister received for her birthday! It's adorable!
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on September 30
Hmm...what should my new username be...?
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on September 25
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I got bored at school and drew Akira Fudo
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on September 21
Kids these days say "Dragon Ball Super is the coolest anime of all" but if you ask them about Dragon Ball Z they don't even know what it is.
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PrincessLuna1
@Helpless
Ah thanks for reminding me of that show i have almost forgotten about it.....im gonna go spam now bye!
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Corbijn3andNolly
The same was going on with Dragon Ball during Dragon Ball Z's time in the spotlight. It's an endless cycle
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Toa_Bora
@Helpless Yep.
on September 20
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Helpless
Also, Voltron.
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