The Cracked Doll

The Cracked Doll

Emma Coma moved into a Victorian house with her family, her mom, dad, and sister. She picked her room on the top floor and looked around. A floor board creaked, she pulled up the floor board to see an old doll under it. A long crack was found on the dolls back..but is the doll just a normal one? After a few days, things started getting weird...so find out yourself.

published on October 12, 201569 reads 23 readers 10 not completed
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Chapter 4.
Entry Two; May 11th, 1820

Entry Two; May 11th, 1820

I do not understand why. Me mum took Emma away! She said that Emma was bad for me. I do not see why! Me mum said that 'I should not be alone in my room, talking to a doll like she was real.' she does not get it! Emma is real, she talks to me. She listens and plays with me. Emma listens to all my problems. But me mum just had to take her away! She meant so much to me, she was always there for me!....I care so much for Emma, and now she sits alone in the dark lonely basement. I do not get it, Emma did nothing wrong. She just moved a tad bit when me mum was looking...so she was taken right in front of me. I just want....just want...just want to hurt her! Me sisters and brothers only laughed at me! I want to make them all pay! PAY!
~Sara
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Kinnare
One more chapter and I can sleep easy
Otherwhise I'm gonna have chlaustrophobia infested dreams for the rest of my life
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simple_sheep
okay I'm fixing the grammar errors right now (not Jane's texting of course) and adding on slightly more to the chapters then I'll write a new one
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Kinnare
Yay okay
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simple_sheep
Wait..someone...cares about this..?
HOLY BALLS I'M GONNA WORK ON IT
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purplegiraffe
is there another chapter? i wanna read more!!!
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simple_sheep
heh im workin on it ;)
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on October 13, 2015
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Art.By.God
I gave it 5 stars. It's awesome! :D
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simple_sheep
really? yay! :D i feel special X3 B)
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on October 12, 2015
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simple_sheep
no one? jeez i expected at lease two people to like this story
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simple_sheep
wow 4 people! :D:D:D
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