The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

One of the few to remain a Mobian, discover Jackie's side of the story before the event began, how she founded the Dauntless Mobians, and her life being the leader in a world where most people are now robots.

published on February 19, 2015338 reads 39 readers 105 not completed
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Chapter 3.

Chapter 2: The Hunt Is On

I open my eyes, which is much to my amazement. I thought I would be dead, falling from such a height of seven stories high. I feel around, and my brain registers that I have safely landed onto a net. I haul myself off the net to my feet, walking forward. Whatever this place is, I think I now know it's underground.
Perfect hideout from the robots.
Taking out a torch from my pocket, I switch the light on as a guide to see where I'm walking. "Is anyone there?" I speak.
If there are survivors down here, surely they would enjoy the company of another person.
A fox of electric blue fur steps out. "Who are you?" His voice is deep, so it must be a male.
"My name is Jackie," I reply. "What are you doing down here all alone?"
"You're not a robot," he says.
I smile. "Let's just say I can resist Eggman's powers with my own."
"I'm Kyle," the fox says. "You must be a very brave girl."
"I never knew I could be this brave though."
He places his hand on my shoulder, and I try not to blush. I'm married, after all. "You can be more when you believe," he says. "I believed I could find shelter, and I found this place."
"Is there anyone else down here?" I ask him.
"No. Just me."
"We'd better turn this place into a little home."
And at that, we start straight on work.

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I finally lie on my bed in my new apartment.
Kyle and I had just finished decorating this underground area into our own hideaway from the robots. While we were at work, a few more Mobians, who were friends of mine, had fallen through the hole down here. Italy, Sky and LuLu. Between us, we became the leaders of this pack, then voted on our main leader, and I won by majority.
We all knew we would seen have to venture back out into the world to find more Mobians able to resist the waves set by Eggman.
The next day, we pack our bags and rise above the ground. Splitting off into 5 different areas, I prepare myself for the danger ahead.
The five of us do have new technology in our watches. Thanks to Tails, at a time before this, of course, our watches now have installed communicators, should we ever need to contact each other.
I see an orchid cat in the distance. "Who are you?" I say.
She turns round, shocked. "My... My name is Lilac," she says.
"It's okay," I reply. "I'm not gonna hurt you."
"Then what are you going to do?"
"I'm going to take you to shelter. Come with me and my friends."
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Frostgoddess
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on October 25, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Pft, such a Kyle thing to say XD Anyway waiting for this shit to get real now #Can'tWait.
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on October 24, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
XD im rooting for Joria because I'm on her said but Javkie...but Joria..but Jackie...Ah! GO JACKIEEEEE X3
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on October 24, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
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Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
I was like magic!! (magic is good :))
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on October 27, 2015
Stardancer
Just read it.
It was awesome!!!
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on October 25, 2015
foilflingza
I READ IT
HOLY NUTS
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on October 24, 2015
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on October 24, 2015
foilflingza
HHOOOOOOLLLLLLLUYYYYYYYYYYY
SHIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT
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on October 23, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
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Frostgoddess
YAY!!!!
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on October 24, 2015
Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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on October 23, 2015
Stardancer
YESSSSSS!
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on October 23, 2015
ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
YESSSSSSS
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on October 23, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Tell ya, if you did some badass fights in here too, with like the Robots vs Some of us, that'd be cool shit. @sapphirethehedgehog Best look out though XD
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on October 23, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Yeah!!! :3
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Stardancer
Amazing!!! Please write more.
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on October 23, 2015
Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
awesome story!!!
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on July 19, 2015
MidnightDaHedgie
Awesome!
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on June 25, 2015
foilflingza
OMG
OMG HOLY SHIT
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on June 23, 2015
Frostgoddess
Awesome!
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on June 22, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: I'm a robot?! D: noooooooo!
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on June 21, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
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ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
*fangirl screams* YES YES YES!!!!!!
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on June 23, 2015
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on June 21, 2015
foilflingza
WRITE MOREEEE JACKIE MORE
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on June 21, 2015
MangletheFox
This story is great!
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Weiss_Schnee
Thank you!
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on June 03, 2015
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on June 03, 2015
The_Demigod_Timelord_Wizard
AWESOMELY EPICALLY KEWL
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Weiss_Schnee
Thank you!
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on April 01, 2015
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on April 01, 2015
Frostgoddess
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on March 07, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Awesome nice idea of the new anti thing could be tense XD <3
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on March 06, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Awesome!
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Weiss_Schnee
Welcome to Dauntless, Swift!
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Yeah, I like it
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on March 06, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
Btw you seen my new pic?
Ik it's rubbish, but look at it for me? I could use feedback.
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on March 06, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
Yeah! XD
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
foilflingza
IT WAS CELINA! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!
And thanks for using my idea! :D
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Weiss_Schnee
Np! Glad you liked it!
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foilflingza
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
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on March 06, 2015
ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
its divergent style XD
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ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
XD I LOVE DIVERGENT
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on March 05, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
XD Yeah, ik it's got a little Divergent in there,
but remember that I made the Sonic-Divergent cross-over, so... yeah.
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ChloeTheTumblrHedgie
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on March 07, 2015
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on March 05, 2015
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on March 05, 2015
foilflingza
IS THE ROBOT CELINA OMG OMG I WANNA KNOWWWW
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on March 02, 2015
Frostgoddess
Awesome!
Lilanna: *turns head this way*
*presses button that closes FNAF-style door, separating Lilanna and us*
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on February 27, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Dun dun dun Sonic ye douche don't hurt a girl like that u mean man thing XD
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Weiss_Schnee
Weren't his fault. He was a robot XD
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SpinnerFTW
Yeah well still
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
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Cristallite
Demn..this is a great story! Too bad it's too late for oc's..alwrll! Still I love it!
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Cristallite
Well ignore what I just said I will see ^.^ thanks Jackie
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on February 25, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
Who the hell said it was too late?
All you need is to make an OC on LilyIcicle's page for the main story, I'll look at it, and see where I can fit you in.
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 25, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
Pfttttt bring it! :D
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on February 23, 2015
SpinnerFTW
pft no
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
PLOT TWIST!!!!
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Weiss_Schnee
IK!
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AlwaysBeInfinite
Awesome! If ya need any help, just ask. I'm here to help :)
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on February 21, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
Trying to work on it now
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on February 21, 2015
AlwaysBeInfinite
When ya gonna write the next chap? x3
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on February 21, 2015
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on February 21, 2015
foilflingza
ITZ SWIFT HEHH
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on February 20, 2015
Fiendish_Heathen
Awesome!
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Weiss_Schnee
Thanks!
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Well swift time to die Kyle's ganna come bite chu:D
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Weiss_Schnee
SWIFT IS A MOBIAN, YOU IDIOT!
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SpinnerFTW
Wait are dumb they speak the same language
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on February 20, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
It should be Danish!
Wait lemme check
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on February 20, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Yeah I put it in google translate and it said it was no in Sweden -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
WTF!
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on February 20, 2015
SpinnerFTW
What!? I googled that -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
Actually, it's Danish.
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on February 20, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Don't chu go Sweden on meh -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
Nej!
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on February 20, 2015
SpinnerFTW
Still ganna do it XD
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on February 20, 2015
Weiss_Schnee
-_- This ain't a zombie apocalypse
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on February 20, 2015
SpinnerFTW
I knew that <.< >.> still ganna bite them :D
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