Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 2016completed

The start of a new life

The start of a new life I woke up, and I was not in the same room "Aww man...there will be one time I wake up in the same room i felt asleep?"
I went down the stairs, only to find that the living room was desert."Mmmh...where they could be? Oh...I'm so stupid, they have to be in they're own home."I went out and "SURPRISE!!!"
"What? What is this? What are you doing?"
It seemed to be in a party, but I couldn't get why.
"Is this because Sonic and Amy got well?"
"No, this is for you!" said Sonic. "We thinked that if you're not a bad guy you would like a little welcome party!"
"A...welcome...party?...But I...I wounded you."
"That? Ahahah, we're fine ,you don't have to worry about that.It's all gone."
I couldn't believe it... they were acting like that never happened...why?
"I can't understand...I thougt that...I'd be killed by you for what I've done"
"We can repair to that if you want." Shadow started to come close.
"Don't move Shadow,I want to kill him,for hurting Sonic!" Amy begun to hammer me, I didn't show resistance, I know I was guilty.
"Amy! Stop!"Yelled Sonic while he was taking Amy away from me "He's not bad, stop it Amy."
"I...I'm sorry Amy...if this make you feel better, go ahead hitting me."
"OK!" "Amy, I told you STOP." Tails helped me to get up
"Thank you Tails."
He smiled "You're welcome"
I looked at them, they seemed to be good people, maybe Amy not really...no...Amy's good too.
The party...well... the others had fun, all were laughing and having good time, I did my best to seem happy, but I don't really like that kind of things.
I prefer to be alone, with no one I can hurt or make sad.
They asked my name and...I knew what would be my answer.
"I'm Redik, Redik the Hedgehog."
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Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More
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Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
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Nah, not this girl!
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on January 13, 2016
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
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on January 13, 2016
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on January 12, 2016
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
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I don't see why not.
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on January 08, 2016
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on January 07, 2016
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
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This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
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*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
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on April 28, 2016
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on April 28, 2016
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
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Thanks, I'll do it.
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on January 04, 2016
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
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on January 04, 2016
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
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I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
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Dun dun duunnnn XD
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on January 04, 2016
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
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on January 04, 2016
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
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on January 04, 2016
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
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on January 04, 2016
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
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on January 04, 2016