Redik the hedgehog

Redik the hedgehog

This is the story of a hedgehog, an experiment, born to kill Sonic and his friends. This is my story. Thanks for reading this, I hope you enjoy.

published on January 04, 2016completed

What the...?

What the...? Something stopped me from giving him the last hit. It wasn't something physical, it was inside me and was telling "STOP! THIS IS WRONG AND YOU KNOW THAT!" Then the rock suddenly exploded. I jumped to avoid that and I saw another guy...Knuckles! He destroyed the rock to make me go away from Sonic and Amy.
"Get away from them you freak!"
How could Knuckles know that...Sure! Sonic must have some kind of chip for communications...but this doesn't explain why Amy is here...
While I was doing these thinks, a giant shuriken flew against me. I admit that I wasn't prepared for that, so...it hit me. That hurt a little, then Knuckles punched me and I flew against...nothing...I was flying...how?
"Now you can't hurt anyone." Another hedgehog?A silver one. How many of them there are? Another guy appeared, this was a chameleon... What...? A fox with two tails, a black hedgehog... A purple cat? "What the hell is going on here? Why there are so many of them? Eggdoc? Answer me!"
"Are you with Eggman?"hearing Tails voice made me feel strange, like I betrayed him...
Cursed DNA! It's because of you if I feel all this! Think R3D1K, how can I escape?Hey this name sucks...focus!
"So, what are we doing with him?"

Tails's POV
He looks like Sonic,but...he said something about Eggman...maybe...

"I'm sorry."
Everyone:-WHAT?
"I'm really sorry for what happened. No! That's not true, I want to kill you all!No! It's a lie I...AAAAAARGH! MY HEAD!RRAAAAAARG!"
And all went black.

Other's POV

Silver:- Seems someone has troubles in his mind.
Knuckles:- What happened to him?He started screaming and blabbing...
Tails:- Let's take him to my house. Maybe I can do something about.
Shadow:- He could attack you when you don't expect.I'll go with you.Knuckles, Silver, you two take care of those two(pointing Sonic and Amy).
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
0.0 out of 5 from 4 users

Comments (19)

Ok, thanks to all those who read this story,who remained with Redik until now and who asked me to continue this.
A special thanks goes to sapphirethehedgehog who made me rediscover the passion for Sonic's universe.(I know I have already said this but I wanted to thank you again)
Atsuko_Maeda_15_Acchan aka Jackie the Hedgehog, I'm sorry that your part has been See More
reply
Hey, it's fine, I don't mind if I'm a small addition, I'm in there, right? :D
reply
Nah, not this girl!
reply
About Author
Report
on January 13, 2016
I'm glad you didn't get angry...usually when I give a part to one of my friends, if it's short, they get mad
reply
About Author
Report
on January 13, 2016
About Author
Report
on January 13, 2016
About Author
Report
on January 12, 2016
Duuude nice!
And may I make a suggestion for my OC to be included, please?
Her name is Jackie,and she is Sonic's wife.
Pwetty pwease???? *Puss In Boots eyes*
reply
I don't see why not.
reply
About Author
Report
on January 08, 2016
About Author
Report
on January 07, 2016
Nice job so far :)
Keep this story going, I have a feeling it will become a big hit within Qfeast's Sonic fanbase!
reply
This is the first time we talked each other. This still makes me smile. *hugs*
https://www.qfeast.com/story/KH7XDN/6-months-treasure-hunt-2
reply
*hugs back* I can't believe it... that long ago...
reply
About Author
Report
on April 28, 2016
About Author
Report
on April 28, 2016
Thanks, I hope to be good enough
reply
Thanks, I'll do it.
reply
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
I'm sure you will be, just keep working at it, and you'll get better.
reply
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
XD I love how Amy was like like "lalala....SONICS IN TROUBLE! ARHHHHHH!" XD it's like she knows o.o
reply
I have to thank you sapphire. It's thanks to you if I found again the passion for Sonic. So...THANKS A LOT!?
reply
Dun dun duunnnn XD
reply
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
You're a hero, Sapph! XD
reply
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
Oh- wait really? Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! :D
reply
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
I'm glad that you're liking it.?
reply
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016
Niiiiiiiiiice. :3
reply
About Author
Report
on January 04, 2016