Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

Take Me Home (Layla's Story)

This is the story of a young hedgehog. Torn apart from her parents when she was young, all she's known in life is one little room she's been trapped in, and torture and abuse. All she wishes for in life is to get away from her abuser and live free. Will it ever come true?

published on June 06, 2014not completed

Chapter 2: Location Found!

Chapter 2: Location Found! *Firstly, sorry is the picture is absolutely crap, I drew it myself in paint. There weren't any bases, so... yeah...*

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Jackie
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Ever since I joined the Freedom Fighters, I've gotten to know a lot of people. I never knew how popular this group was. People must really care.
When I joined, I was teamed up with Nayma, and a brown hedgehog called Eli. Eli has spines like Sonic, but his eyes are grey-ish, like Sapphire's but darker. He wears dark turquoise shoes with neon yellow stripes.
I wait nervously as Nayma continues to type on her laptop. We've been constructing a plan based around a girl named Layla. We didn't know for sure, but Sally said we needed to keep a close eye on her, and track down her location.
"Jackie! I think this might be it!"
I run over to Nayma's side and look at the screen. It shows a plan of a house in the countryside. I then type "LAYLA THE HEDGEHOG" and what is then inputted - which we didn't do, can computers even type? - is "LOCATION OF SUBJECT FOUND".
This is where she is!
"Nayma, this is the place!" I say. "I'll go tell Eli!"
"No need," Nayma says. "He's already gone out to look for her. I can contact him though."
"Sweet."
Nayma then holds on to her right ear. "Eli, we've found the location of Layla the Hedgehog. Look in the outskirts of Trandyl for a lonesome house."
I really hope Eli can pull through on this.
Fingers crossed!
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NOOO11
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on June 09, 2016
Can u write more and add me PWEAZE?!
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on June 27, 2015
Whoa.... It took you a long time to make the next chap xD but it's nice.. :3
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on February 02, 2015
Awesome story! Can u add me?
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on August 11, 2014
Np ;)
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on June 06, 2014
Thank you for adding me!
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on June 06, 2014
I can't wait for chapter 4! If it's OK with you can my OC be part of the story? You know if it's OK with you.
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on June 06, 2014
I am writing more MD, and yeah I'm taking OC's. That's why I decided to include FandomLover's OC, Eli.
Do you want Dawn to be part of the Freedom Fighters???
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on June 06, 2014
Please write more! Tell me if you accept OC's. It's okay if you don't.
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on June 06, 2014
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on June 06, 2014
Can't Wait For Third Chapter
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on June 06, 2014
Log the story! :,)
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