Why Don't You Come and Find Me?

Why Don't You Come and Find Me?

A poem I came up with in JAG class when I was reading about the WWI and WWII. Yeah, I don't know how I got this idea originally, but here it is!

published on March 20, 201326 reads 23 readers 9 completed
Why Don't You Come and Find Me?

Why Don't You Come and Find Me?

I see you, but you can not see me
I'm hiding behind a tree,
why don't you come and find me?
I'm playing my favorite game:
Hide and Seek.
Why don't you come and find me?
~
I'm not that far,
I'm very near
What is that I smell?
Oh wait, it's your fear.
Fear not, but may I ask:
Why aren't you finding me dear one?
~
If I told you where I was,
would you collapse and cry?
Or would you run off and go to get help,
and tell the police you found the decayed body of
Julia Rhy?
Please come and find me dear one.


(Author's Note: Like I said, I have no idea where I came up with this idea originally, but I was reading a book about the wars and...here it is (0_o) Weird if you ask me lol)
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Comments (9)

Gothgirlemolover
Nice poem babe x
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on July 26, 2013
fleur22045
oh my

Its a wonderful poem, it leaves the reader feeling so mystified!

Its EPIC! :D
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on April 24, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
This poem is weird it awesome. Why do u think it s weird?
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on April 13, 2013
Nobody.07
:) That was awesome
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on April 10, 2013
GlowingAndFading
Sweeeeet poem
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on March 28, 2013
LexiCha
AWSOME!! My computer is ALSO working! DOUBLE AWSOME!!
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on March 27, 2013
thatsssanicequizzzyouhavethere
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on March 23, 2013
Bmac99
Oooh, I like it:D It's myserious and kind of dark. I think you should use this as an introduction to a story about that^. Maybe about the girl named Julia Rhy being a ghost and she's dark, and creepy, and all that fun stuff. Haha. Anyway, you realy should write a story to go with it and great poem:)
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on March 21, 2013
EmoLover16
I love ur poems, and can i please make a request?
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on March 20, 2013