Stranger

Stranger

This story is about a girl named Sarah, she's been having dreams of a stranger walking around her home to find her. There's more to this story then this though. So stop reading this and go to the story already.

published on July 24, 2017not completed

Over and over and over again..

      Sarah wakes up back in her closet, she hears the window open and the glass breaking again for the third time. Sarah is absolutely terrified, she's also very, very confused. She looks around, it's nothing but pitch black in the dark closet. She pulls out her phone, on messenger it still has her text and her dads text. She waits for the police and her dad to come home, she checks the time and it's 12:15. They should be here, it's been over 4 hours. She waits and waits, only to hear the stranger walking around. She starts to feel weird, and hears the closet doors open. "Dad!" Sarah yells, but it was the stranger.

      The stranger picked up a knife, he tries to stab Sarah but she dodges it in time. She quickly gets up and goes under his arm but he stabs Sarah in the back. She coughs blood, it wasn't a knife.. It was a machete. It went through her whole body, and the stranger jerks it out of her body. Sarah lays on the floor, bleeding as the stranger watches. She thought this was a dream, she's feeling lots and lots of pain. "It hurts.." Sarah says. The man drags her into the closet and closes the doors. The stranger kills people in there sleep when they think about him to much,he will also replace your eyes with something like a marble, so what about you just think about rainbows and ponies? Anyways, later the police and the dad came home. Sarah's dad saw blood leading to the closet. The police opened it, and there she was. Sarah, just laying there dead with her eyes replaced with marbles, and on the wall written with blood, "STRANGER" Goodnight everyone :)
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I liked it, but there are a few grammar mistakes that kind of annoyed me. Also, I feel like this story could be longer, with some character details and stuff, ya know? Overall, really good story.
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on July 25, 2017