My Poetry and the Like

My Poetry and the Like

Title's pretty self-explanatory. This ranges a lot from dark and scary to light and happy!

published on April 15, 201492 reads 25 readers 9 not completed
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Chapter 4.
A Hand on the Shoulder

A Hand on the Shoulder

Purity and virtue mean nothing to the world
Pain, grief, and sorrow is all she has ever found
Her immaculate wings crumpled against her
Love was now the enemy, not the friend.

Until a hand fell upon her shoulder
The hand of a friend or a love
That she did not know
But it was a hand nonetheless and a hand she needed

Love is not the enemy,
It is not what leads to pain and suffering
It is the illusion of love that pains you
Do not stop your quest for care, stand up, and lead on without a care.

The hand now becomes arms, wrapped around her wings of gold
Leading her eyes to the sky the voice said
Let your heart be free but may it be protected
For one as pure and good as you will be used

The greed for an angel and the greed for love is strong
So you must make your heart stronger.
Be the god I know you are and rise up to your burdens
And do not carry them far, instead let your wings soar
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Comments (9)

MockingjayDistrict
Wow, all these poems are beautiful. I live the way you described Darkness with human traits and characteristics. If I didn't know better I would have thought these poems were written by a professional. You could really become famous from writing!
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Elleyd
Thank you :D
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on July 03, 2014
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on July 03, 2014
Nightcat
whoa...................these are like story-poems :D the language is amazing, description and feels and too much amazing stuff for my brain *bang*
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Elleyd
haha xD and yea the last two arent really poems just descrptions
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 29, 2014
MMMMMMM6
You should definitely submit this to a competition or something. Even if you don't win you will still get your work out there. That's what ive been doing :)
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on June 02, 2014
MissFattyPattyPoo
Cool! I luv them!
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on April 26, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
You are such an amazing writer! I cannot express in words the extents of your talents! (LOL that sounded like I was some sophisticated British socialite)
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on April 26, 2014
Tariyukimew
beautiful ^~^
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on April 21, 2014
threebeltking
THESE ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 15, 2014