I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

I'm in love with a killer~ a jeffxcrystal love story

Jeff falls in love with a girl named crystal. Jeffxcrystal love story.

published on February 18, 20143031 reads 96 readers 32 completed
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Chapter 18.

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Crystal's P.O.V

Everybody Was in the living room.
"Guys!"'Jeff yelled.
"What?"'everybody said.
"Since Slendy isn't home, wanna go to a club? (The club is gonna be a party club, but here are no strippers. Just wanted to point that out.)
"Jeff, I'm 15, I don't got a ID!" I yelled.
"Raise your hand if you have a I.D, fake or not fake?"Jane hollered. Everybody raised a hand except me. Even hoodie had one! Jeff asked Ben to make me one make me one. I went up stairs, to his room. He sat down at his computer.
"Birthdate?" He asked.  
"7/22/1998" I said. Then he changed it to 7//22/1989. He asks me all other questions, I answers them. He printed it out on plastic. Then he gave it to me.
"Put it somewhere cold." He said. I ran into Jeff's room and put it in his mini fridge. I went down stairs and asked Jane if she had anything to wear tonight.
She pulled out a short black and purple dress, a crop top and short shorts, and skinny jeans and a t-shirt.
"Jeff!" I yelled. He came running in.
"Which one should I wear?" I asked him.
"This one." He pointed to the short shorts and a cropped shirt.  Jane grabbed some shoes out. She pulled out a lot of heels, I picked one that was black and had peep toe, and a 2 bows. Jane left and she let me get dressed. The shorts were from Hollister. I slipped on the shorts and put on the shirt. Along with a shirt, she put a small furry shrug with it. I slipped in my clothes and went down stairs. Every boy was looking at me.
"Let me do your hair and makeup." Jane said. I ran back upstairs. Jane teased my hair, and put it in a emo style. She put makeup on me. I looked in the mirror. I looked perfect. My hair color was black with turquoise ends. I ran back downstairs and every guy blushed. I ran over to Jeff. His face was bright red.
"Jeff get ready." Jeff ran upstairs with me. He found black skinny jeans, converse and a white button up shirt with a black tie.After we all,got dressed, we took 2 cars. Jeff and me were in the back seat with Toby, in the front was Ej driving, and Jane in the front, and in the way back was Masky, Hoodie, and Lj. BEN sat on Jeff's lap. He had no choice. Besides, BEN and Jeff are best friends. It was already 6:06. When we got there, there was about 100 people there, and the club was pretty big. The person at he lobby checked all our IDs we all ran inside. Everyone went there own separate ways. Me and Jeff looked around there was no hidden cameras anywhere. So Jeff didn't change into his illusion form but most Pasta's did. Me and Jeff just talked for a while, then at 9:00 more people came in. I grabbed Jeff's arm and ran to the bar. Jeff got beer and I got vodka. We drank away. Then I saw EJ in his illusion from. He looked pretty good, but Jeff looked better.

Jeff P.O.V

I changed into my illusion form when I saw someone coming. Me and Crystal sat at. A table together. These girls walked by me, giving me smiles. I growled at them but hey didn't notice. Crystal smacked my arm. I let out a yelp. When Crystal was getting our food, 2 girls came, they were pretty, pretty ugly. One tried to sit on my lap but I pushed her. The other one sat in crystal's seat.
"Oh c'mon, have fun." She said the other one just flirted with me. I got up and ran to Crystal. The 2 girls where in a corner, talking to me with her friends. Me and Crystal came back. She stood me up next to her. She kissed me. We continued kissing. My hair was in my eyes and all you could see my smile. ((Jeff is in his illusion form.)) she put my hands around her waist. She put her hands on the back of my head. Stroking my hair. We continued kissing. The girls gave us a evil glare and walked away. She stopped and we sat down. We ate the chicken and mini burgers we ordered. After we were done eating, we just talked for 25 minutes. then she dragged me up to the dance floor. She just stared at me. I'm in love with a killer was on. She still looked at me. Finally she said something.
"Wanna dance?"  We danced for a little bit then we had a idea. Spy on the other Pasta's. I stood on my  tippy-toes and looked though the people. I saw hoodie with a girl, and EJ was drunk. Ben, he was just, wild. LJ was talking with a girl,,Masky with a girl, Jane with....Jack. EJ was with Jane...EJ was still drunk, with Jane. Next thing I knew, Jane kissed EJ.
"Crystal, Jane kissed EJ!!" I continued looking and saw Toby with Clocky, that came with us. Nina was at the bar talking to a guy. Crystal grabbed a beer. She drank it as fast as she can.
"Calm down, Crystal." She put the beer bottle down. Cupidshuffles started playing. Crystal got up and ran to one of the lines. Every Creepypasta was on it. No human, extept Crystal. We started the Cupid Shuffle. And when it was done crystal sat down. She groaned.
"What's the matter?" I asked.
"I'm just tierd!" She snapped. She was a little drunk. A slow song came on.
"Would you like to dance?" I asked. She seemed  back to her normal self. I grabbed her hand and we went to the dance floor. I put her hands around my waist. She put her hands on my neck. We danced I till the song was done. Just then when we walked to our table, someone pulled my hair. It wasn't crystal. It was a differnt girl. She looked like she was 21. I smacked her. She gasped. I picked Crystal up, and ran into the girls bathroom. After about 10 minutes of waiting, we walked back out. I looked around and grabbed every pasta, and orderd them each a shot. I grabbed Crystal's Arm and gave her a shot. We all formed into this group. We did a cheer. Was I the only one who wasn't drunk? After A while, I saw BEN curled up in a ball on the couch. I picked him up and put him on my back. He woke up and rested his head back down. I sat him in the chair with my hoodie and Crystal's shrug. He seemed comftorbul there. Crystal went into the crowd. She found Toby, alone. I followed behind. Soon I was next to crystal.
"What's wrong Toby?" She asked. He took off his mouthgaurd and goggles and put them on a table.
"Clockwork...."he sobbed.
"What happened?" I asked him.
"She flipped me off, and ran with another guy, right after the big pasta cheer" he cried. I found Clockwork and Crystal stayed with Toby. I asked Clocky questions. She answered them correctly. I tried to kiss her on the cheek. Just to make sure she wasn't drunk. She slapped my face. She's not drunk.... I thought to my self. I saw crystal hugging Toby while he cried.
"Jeff can I dance with Toby to make him feel better?" She asked me quietly so Toby didn't hear.
"Fine." I mumbled. Crystal grabbed Toby's hand and the DJ put on a slow song. BEN was waking up, so I went over to him
"Where's the crack?" He asked.
"BEN!!!"
"What?"
"Where at a club!!"
"Ohh. I want my crack!" He yelled. I grabbed my sweater and pulled out crack for him. He grabbed it and lighted it. Damn kid. I looked over at Toby and Crystal. She had her head in his chest. She stood on her tippy toes, lifted her head up, and kissed Toby. Not a bad kiss, like a friendly kiss. After the song was done, her and Toby came running to me.
"Jeff, uhh, look behind you." Toby said..
"Ya, I know. BEN wound not shut up instill I gave Him it." BEN continued smoking it. It was 2:30 a.m, and me and Crystal decided to dance and have more drinks.'Gas Pedal' played. She did a tiny lap danced to me. I finnaly got up and went with her to the bar. She had Vodka and I stuck with beer. Now she was getting drunk. I had more beers I till I got drunk my self. We acted legit crazy. Toby came with us to go get Hoodie.
"Umm, Hoodie, there drunk. We have to go." he said.

20 minutes later.
Hoodies P.O.V

Now Toby was drunk. The only pastas that weren't drunk was me, Clockwork and Nina. Masky was drunk.

Noramal P.O.V

Hoodie picked up Crystal and her things. Clockwork held Jeff's hand and the rest of the pastas walked out. EJ couldn't drive so Hoodie had to. Clockwork drove the other car with Nina. Jeff got in the open space near the back and laid down with crystal. They did not feel good. We all got in the cars and drove to the slender mansion. Jeff and Crystal ran to the bathroom, getting sick. Jeff puked once down the hall and crystal puked on the staircase. What lovely couples. Nina slept  on the love seat, Clockwork slept on the couch, and rest found somewhere else to go sleep. Everybody went to a room  that lived in the mansion.

Crystal's P.O.V

I got sick. Me and Jeff were laying in bed and jeff had his head on my chest.
"Jefffff" I yelled. He sat up confused. We were both drunk. He kissed me a couple of times then we drifted off to sleep.
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bakugo
CONTINUE THIS DAMNED STORY I REFUSE TO BE LEFT WITH A F*CKING CLIFHANGGER!!!!!
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on October 30, 2020
FailedAbortion
I really like the way the character dialogue is. It's very fitting with the setting
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on August 29, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben- god is that you?
Me-yes.
Ben- I'll be good plz!
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Tiara_the_manx
Everyone but Jeff and crystal: are you having sex?
Jeff: hell na.
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on July 08, 2016
Tiara_the_manx
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Ben-where the crack?
Me- up your ass!
Ben- get it out.
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Tiara_the_manx
Ben: IM GAY AND I WANT TO HAVE LITTLE BENNY CHILDREN.
SLENDERMAN: GET F*CK OUT OF HERE GAY BOY!
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on July 08, 2016
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on July 08, 2016
The_demon_Rose
5 star
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on February 11, 2016
DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
I like Jeff's illusion form. Just his hair covering his eyes. XD
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on January 16, 2016
Kaleythecreepypasta
jeff so sensitive...i like it!B)
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on November 24, 2015
MysticVolume
I really love this story.... Very intimidating. You are very talented and have fantastic imagination. You should also put alot more of the characters thoughts of certain situations in it as well to give a better view of how they handle conflicts in the story. If done, we would understand the characters personality on a way better level
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on December 23, 2014
gothichellokitty
Good story
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on December 22, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
AWESOME!!! EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 23, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more chapters soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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on April 23, 2014
Cristallite
Thumbs up
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on April 15, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
You should mke this into a book and publish it, Its AWESOME! I would so read it again!
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on April 09, 2014
Ptvamber
Yup it will never stop
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Make more!!! Or is that the last one :(
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on March 29, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
When r u gonna make the nest one?
Can u make 3 more long ones today!??!?!?!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks so much! And I will!
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on March 21, 2014
Jessica_the_greatest
Continue with it! This is like the best story EVER! MORE! And yeah have them do it. bc tht would make it more interesting to see wat would happen next!
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on March 21, 2014
Ptvamber
No, never!
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on March 02, 2014
mel887274
MORE MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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on March 01, 2014
Ptvamber
He sliced*'there throats, at he same time
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Never mind!!
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok guys, I must've end end the story, because I can't add any more chapters so I'll make a new stour but it's gonna be continued
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on February 20, 2014
Ptvamber
I put more!
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on February 19, 2014
Ptvamber
There's more!! I won't stop!
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :-*
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Last paragraph it said: Jeff...I love you, don't* let that one person ruin you." Forget the "I" in that sentence. Lol B)
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
I made it :D
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Ok <3
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on February 18, 2014
Ptvamber
Thanks guys!
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on February 18, 2014