Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

More unfolds as Flash and Daisy find new friends and watch there fowls grow. There will be a surprise guest... Who will it be?

published on August 07, 201387 reads 14 readers 66 not completed
Chapter 1.
Prologue

Prologue

The nurse comes into the waiting room, Raincloud is there. The nurse sits next to her putting her hoof on Raincloud's shoulder, "I'm sorry, he's gone... But he went peacefully." Raincloud droops her head and sobs, after a while Flash comes and sees his mother sobbing and braces her in a hug showing no sad emotion on the outside but sobbing on the inside. "Let me take you back home." The mare pushes Flash away, "no, there are to many memories there." Flash looks into his mothers eyes, "I meant to me and Daisy's." Raincloud wipes her tears, "ok, but I must visit him one last time." Flash nods and both ponies go into the room to pay there last respects to Rainbowflash.

After a while Sweetie pie speaks, "you must be Raincloud." Raincloud looks to the mare, "yes. Did he talk about me?" The mare nods ,"you an your family were all he talked about, he didn't tell me much about himself." Raincloud smiled, "yeah, he was always interested in every pony else." The mare turns to Flash, "and this must be Flash." Flash gives a nod, Sweetie pie continues, "you look like your father, I hope you know when he talked about you he praised at what you were like." Flash replies, "thank you ma'am... What is your name?" The mare smiles, "my name is sweetie pie." In the awkward silence Flash looks at Sweetie pie 'she look like some pony I know.' Scootaloo walks in and greets Sweetie pie with a hug. Flash watches then asks, "Scootaloo, do you visit sick ponies?" Scootaloo shakes her head, "no, I'm just visiting my mother." Flashes eyes light up, "I thought she looked familiar, how did you know she was your mother?" It was Sweetie pie that answered, "your father. We talked and then he asked about my family. I said I had a filly. He asked what she looked like.. So I described her, next think I know he's on the phone." Flash smiles and exchange glances with his mother. Scootaloo started to weep. Flash asks, "scoots, what's wrong?" Scootaloo replied, "after he introduced me to her, I hugged him, and said I'm sorry you are.. Like this. He replied, it's ok scootaloo, if I had not got it you would not have Ben reunited wit... Your... Mother. He then passed away." Tears form in every ponies eyes.
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Comments (66)

Anime_Fanguy
Sorry for the long wait I'm starting the new chapter as Iv been in polytechnic for 1 week now
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on February 23, 2014
Mikaela.Hyakuya
Yes please update :)
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on January 27, 2014
I_LOVE_DORA_5559
AMAZINGNESS IS HAPPENING
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on January 27, 2014
Anime_Fanguy
In will add one chapter per day. Any requests will be added. Thank you
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on November 13, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
*sugh* ok Daisy you can do the mares party.
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on November 13, 2013
Daisy_Pegasy
YAY, Flash this is awesome.. PLZ let me help with the story.. i can do the "girly" bits.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ:-*
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on November 12, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
You'll be there. I fixed my phone so my stories will continue
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on November 11, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
The rings are bracelets for there hooves
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on October 06, 2013
Rainbow_Bird
Awesome! I'm the ring bearer! Wait, how are they supposed to fit those on their hoofs?
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on October 06, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Sorry for yet another delay. My phone needs repair so I need to re right those chapters. Please bear with me.:">
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on September 23, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
This is a promace. I WILL UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTERS BY THE WEEKEND
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on September 19, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
its ok.
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on September 19, 2013
Aqua_Bubble
Oh ok thanks and sorry about what happened...
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on September 19, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
*worry
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on September 18, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Also sorry for the delay with the story. I. Had some Health issues... But don't warty I'm al better now.
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on September 18, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Also Aqua_Bubble if you wanna be in one if my stories there's also Warriors FanFic.
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on September 18, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Well see, IV got a lot if ponies on the list, I'll see when I can add you
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on September 18, 2013
Aqua_Bubble
Wow this is a really good story is it possible if I could join? My name's aqua bubble and you can see my profile picture to see what I look like
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on September 18, 2013
Moonlight_Dreamer
Great story! And congratulations!
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on September 07, 2013
Mikaela.Hyakuya
THIS BOOK IS SO FREAKING AWESOME WITH A CAPITAL!!
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on August 24, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Pt 2 will be out tonight or tomorrow
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on August 24, 2013
XxTwilight_Sparkle_FanxX
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on August 23, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Yes you may xXTwilight_SparklexX. Pm me your character
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on August 23, 2013
XxTwilight_Sparkle_FanxX
Can I join? That would be nice!
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on August 23, 2013
Mikaela.Hyakuya
:) thanks can't wait for the next chapter &[]
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on August 22, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
It suits you.
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on August 21, 2013
Mikaela.Hyakuya
btw i'm now blazing fire
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on August 21, 2013
Mikaela.Hyakuya
I'M SO EXICTED :D
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on August 21, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
*sigh* ok. Your luck I haven't added blaze yet. I will make the change.
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on August 21, 2013
Mikaela.Hyakuya
OMG I keep changing names but this one's final instead of blaze can I be called blazing fire? Everything else is the same
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on August 21, 2013
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