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Deadly Love (Jeff The Killer Love Story)

Deadly Love (Jeff The Killer Love Story)

Jeff the Killer is my favorite Creepypasta and I wanted to do a story with him. My sister/best friend Precious gave me this idea when I was texting her yesterday so all thanks to her, for giving me this idea. I know Jeff the Killer doesn't love and never will, but I wanted to do this just for fun. So don't like it, don't read it. If you do like it, please comment rate and whatever else.

published on May 10, 2013157 reads 130 readers 37 not completed
Preface

Preface

I watched it all up close as I saw a side of him that he never shown. He looked down at me with those piercing eyes of his. I saw anger and then I saw sadness. What I couldn't understand was why he was acting this way. He never done this before. This should be my moment; my last moment where he would strike and end my life, but no. Instead of raising the knife, he raised his empty hand and brought it up to my cheek. Tears were streaming down my face and I choked out a sob. He wiped away my tears with his thumb and then lowered his hand down to my neck.
He wrapped his hands around it and squeezed softly.
"You have no idea on how bad I want to kill you.", he whispered in my ear. I felt him brush his lips softly across my ear. I heard him sigh and then whispered again. "But I just can't see myself doing it. What is it about you, that makes me want to..."
He couldn't finish his sentence. He couldn't bare to utter that one word that everyone knew he was scared to say. He pulled his face away from me, but held a firm grip on my throat. He tightened his grip then, causing me to choke out a breath. When he saw this, he squeezed tighter.
"Jeff...", I gasped. "Please don't..."
He looked down at me with angry eyes now. Even though he was smiling with that stained smile he created, he looked disgusted. He threw me back and I fell on my side. I let out a cry. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Jeff pick up his blood stained knife, and got up. I felt his eyes burn down on me and all I did was bow down my head. I didn't want him to see me cry, nor did I want to give him the satisfaction of seeing me weak, but it was no use.
Without a word, Jeff turned on his heel and walked out. I didn't know what exactly just happened, but I knew for a fact that sooner or later Jeff, will be back.



(*Author's Note: I know this is a little short and not good, it's still a rough draft yet. After I'm done writing this story, I will go back and change stuff and check my spelling, grammar, pacing, tenses and punctuation. Thanks for reading this everyone. I hope you all like it =))
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Comments (37)

jefflover
Jeff:im going to kil princess chloe she is so****** me:oh jeff you would really do that jeff:of course me:oh your such a beast with your words and acctions jeff:well because i am a monser😈
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on December 26, 2014
jefflover
I was wish i was dating jeff and he that he doesnt have the gutt to kill me because he loves me
\someday i wish that happened
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on December 26, 2014
Frostgoddess
Jeff is SO cool! Honestly, I kind of wish I was in that girl's place. :3
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on April 01, 2014
seippup12
JEFFY IS SO HAWT I CANT STAND IT!!!!!!!!
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jefflover
Jane the killer: jeff is MINE!!! Me: ladies calm down jeff IS MINE😈
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on December 26, 2014
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on December 13, 2013
Marawrr
Why you no finish story? D:
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on November 22, 2013
Elfy_TheElf
YEA HELLRAISER YOU TELL THAT OWL GUY!!
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on November 22, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Owl361 if ur getting annoyed by everyone making Jeff the killer stories, then I suggest u stop reading them and do something else in ur spare time because if someone wants to write a Jeff the killer story, then let them. It's not really ur business on what they do and what they not do and if it annoys u so much then stop reading them and move on, its simple as See More▼
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on July 03, 2013
Mary_chan
OH MY GOD I WISH I WAS HER!!! I LOVE YOUR WORK STEPHANIE!! AND I U JEFF :3
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on July 01, 2013
choripancita
(in reference to PrincesChloe's comment) *throws on white lab coat and goggles* I think it's trying to communicate! throw it in quarantine! I must studdy further!
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on July 01, 2013
choripancita
nyaaaaaa! soo cool! write moar plz! sequel, maybe?
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on July 01, 2013
StormHeart
So, AWESOME...
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on June 25, 2013
JemStone17
i love it
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on June 16, 2013
LimeGreenTiger
Wait not
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on June 09, 2013
LimeGreenTiger
That was wow that is good.
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on June 09, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
I'm laughing soooo hard at PrincessChloe's post right now because ik that Stephanie rocks and haters, sorry u couldn't phase her hahahhaha sucker. Nice job on the story Steph I really liked it!!! The other post was terrible typing so yeah.
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on June 08, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Lol imauguing solo hard at PrjncessChloe"'s post right now because Ik that Stephanie rocks and haters, sorry u couldn't phase her ha ha ga sucker. Nice job on the story Steph I liked it!!
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on June 08, 2013
Rainbow_Bird
Make more make more!
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on May 28, 2013
LexiCha
Jeff: Why thank you.
Lexi: Yes, yes he is. I've seen his handy work. It's pretty freaking awsome!
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on May 27, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Lmao!!!! Jeff is ver beautiful and creative with his handy work hehe
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on May 27, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
Chloe would look horroble if that happened. Jeff IS beautiful and awesome.
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on May 27, 2013
LexiCha
Awzum! But Jeff thinks he's beautiful and he kind of is. :/ But PrincessZoe would be ugly either way. Lolz.
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on May 27, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
jeff dose look like how lexicha explained and if that happened to you PrincessChloe i would be so happy. I'm just evil.
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on May 27, 2013
LexiCha
I did that just to tell you how Jeff looks right about now, lil 'princess'. Just don't call her story that again.
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on May 22, 2013
LexiCha
Well, Ms. PrincessCloe, your royalness, I believe you wouldn't know a good story if it hit you in the face, BURNT your face, cut your lips to a smile so wide, cut your eyelids off, singed your hair, and made you stare at your forever smile with blinkless eyes in the mirror.
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on May 22, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
(cont.)friends (and I can understand why) but I'm willing to give you a chance I love to help people, and if your having troubles, and that's why you're hating, then don't be afraid to ask for help instead of hating on everybody So, how about it? Wipe the plate clean and start over?
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on May 22, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
@PrincessChloe I'd like to see you do better 'Cause I see your really going to get far in life...(Sarcasm) There's this one quote that I love; Haters are just confused admirers who don't understand why people love you so much I think this is totally true. No! Wait! I KNOW this is totally true XXxSilentHopexXX is an amazing and kind person with real talent, See More▼
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on May 22, 2013
PrincessChloe
This sure as Hell isn't good. This really sucked too. I think you can do better than this....well actually, rephrase that because I actually don't think you can. I read in your goodbye qfeast post where you said you were going to college to become a writer? Seriously? You can't even write!! You better find something else to do before you make yourself look bad.
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jefflover
why did you even read this story you are just jelouse of her work and you cant even write
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on May 22, 2013
WWEChampion20
clever
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on May 16, 2013
EvilAngel1490
Write more! I love it.
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on May 16, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Awesome story!!!
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on May 15, 2013

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