Friday the 13th: The Beginning

Friday the 13th: The Beginning

This story is about when I go to summer camp. Little do I know that the camp has a dark, brutal secret.

published on October 26, 2012completed

Chapter 4

I went towards the scream and found that it was coming from potter's cabin. I opened the door the find potter's lifeless body. "TORNADO!!! CATO!!! CLOVE!!!! HELP" I screamed as loud as I could. Cato came running from the lake. "Whats wrong?" he asked.  "p-p-p-potter is dead" I stuttered. "Yeah right let me check." Cato moved me aside and looked in the cabin. He let out a lous scream and started running. We both ran to find Tornado and Clove in the mess hall. "Guys, potter is dead. Something is going on." I told them. "Who did it?" Clove asked. When she finished that sentence, Jason Voorhees smashed through the windows of the mess hall. "RUN!!!!!!!" I screamed. We all ran for the counselor's cabin. When we got there, we found him dead. I looked for a hiding place. A stray camper walked by and said "What is going." That was all he could get out before Jason rammed a machete through his chest. I ran with my friends to the woods, hoping he wouldn't find us there. "Guys we can't keep running, we need to do something." Cato said panickly. "I think I know what to do." I nervously said.
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Kinda predictable, and cluttered.
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on July 10, 2017
I LUV JaSON TOO :3
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on July 22, 2013
I thought Jason became a killer because a woman killed his mom and he has been bullied alot
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on July 22, 2013
I like it but bad to read at midnight, I learned my lesson
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on June 03, 2013
cool
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on May 05, 2013
Nice book I dont really get it though like it all went too fast like start with her parents or her talking to her parents/her about summer camp them say like a week or month later she got to go and what she packed when she got there what did she see I know she saw her friends but about the camp tents? or like a campfire put out or something was it day or night See More
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on March 21, 2013
It was gd
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on January 15, 2013
please write more? =)
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on January 11, 2013
sorry for not writing new chapters to my new story
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on December 23, 2012
The story was really cool, but I'm kinda freaked out and don't want to look out the window incase the guy in the hockey mask comes!
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Don't worry, it'd only at Crystal Lake on Friday the 13th! (・∀・)
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on November 25, 2016
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on December 13, 2012
Its okaaay-ish
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on December 02, 2012
why always friday the 13 i love fridays why cant it be monday the 13?
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on November 22, 2012
I will make another one but I have alot of homework.
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on November 15, 2012
LOVE THIS STORY :D
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on November 14, 2012
i like it!
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on November 08, 2012
... that was pretty good!! scary :D
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on November 06, 2012
I hope you make another one soon!
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on November 05, 2012
Koool!!!!!!!!
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on November 05, 2012
its ok peeta it was a GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on November 03, 2012
That... Was... AMAZING! Best Story Ever!
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on November 03, 2012
LOVE IT
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on November 02, 2012
That's good
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on November 02, 2012
Awsome When Do You Expect Chapter 5 Will Be Out
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on November 01, 2012
YAY I WANT CHAPTER 5!
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on November 01, 2012
LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!
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on November 01, 2012
Oh BTW, sorry that you die potter.
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on October 31, 2012
lOVE IT!
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on October 29, 2012
THIS IS AWESOME
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on October 29, 2012
1. More Tornado coming soon
2. My birthday is Nov 3
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on October 28, 2012
where is Tornado?? ps. on ch. 2... creepy!! was this really ur birthday when you made this peeta?
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on October 28, 2012
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