Stories Entertwined

Stories Entertwined

This is a story about all your favorite book characters coming together and spending their senior year in Mount Grays High School.

published on September 04, 201441 reads 14 readers 39 not completed
Chapter 1.

First Day

~Tris's POV~

I stomped towards Mount Gays High School. My eyes dragged along the ground, and I bumped into a boy, causing his books to fall. He had blonde hair and blue eyes. "Watch it," he said to her. Then he sighed. He stuck out a hand and offered it to me. I slowly put my hand in his and shook. "I'm Luke Castellan," he said, smiling at her brown hair, which was pulled behind her ears in a messy ponytail, and she took in his pale blue eyes, his messy blonde hair."Tris," she said. "Tris?" said Luke, confused. "B-Beatrice Prior," she said, offering a faint smile. Suddenly, Luke slid his hand out of hers and dashed away, clumsily scooping up his books in the process. "Percy! Percy!" he seemed to scream.
I sighed. "Great. My first day here and I can't make a friend."
"At least you still have me!"
I jumped at the noise.
Christina was standing next to me.
"Christina..." I rolled my eyes.
"C'mon," Christina said, sulking. "I spent more than two months visiting the hospital in Erudite illegally, watching them attempt to get the bullet out of your heart. And when they did, I threw a surprise party for you!"
I knew she was right.
"Fine..."
Me and Christina kind of spaced out, thinking about everything that had been going on back in Chicago. Wars between the factions. All that jazz. I shook my head. Christina's eyes looked glazed, her mouth open and her breathing shallow. A yell interrupted our thoughts.
"Peeta! That's NOT funny!" We turned to see a girl named Katniss Everdeen smack a boy named Peeta Mellark. His cheek burned a bright pink, but he didn't notice. "I DID see Prim! I did! I did!" insisted Katniss as she swung open the swinging double doors of the building. I stopped. I stared. "I can't do this," I breathed.
I had broken up with Four a week after I got out of the hospital, but he broke up with me, not vice versa. Tears lunged to my eyes, and my mind wandered elsewhere then my concerns about meeting Peeta and Katniss.
Four had his arm around a girl.
She has a gas tank behind her, on a red wagon that she pulled with her. "Your beautiful, Hazel."
She didn't giggle like I would of done. I spotted sadness in her eyes.
"Please. Call me Hazel Grace."
Suddenly, a ringing sounded in my ears. Me and Christina took off running towards the building, skidding to a stop in front of our french class. The class was beautiful. Floral wallpaper ran up and down the cream-colored walls. The teacher had a few bobby pins stuck in her blonde hair, which was piled onto her head and secured with a pink elastic band.
She wrote a word on the chalkboard.
"Mrs. Amirault," read Christina. She was across the room from me, but I could still hear her.
"Bonjour," she said.
She asked a few people their names and where they hailed from, and finally she got to me.
"Bonjour. Quel est votre nom?"
"Mon, nom est Tris."
"Tres bon."
"Je suis originaive de Chicago. Voulez-vous ma faction?"
"Faction?"
Kids were starting to get bored. Peeta yawned dramatically. I instantly got a dislike for him.
"Ca ne fait rien."
She went to the girl next to me. Her name was Annabeth, and she harked from Camp Half-blood, she said.
We learned some french abbreviations, and then the bell rung. The class flooded out into the hallway.
Luke passed me while going from Algebra to French, and gave me a smile. I didn't return it. I gave him a frown.
And that's how the day started.
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MockingjayDistrict
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ellotherelove
lolly
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ellotherelove
Don't worry, there is a funny twist. Luna realizes that the only reason she liked Jacob was because he smelled like french fries
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on September 17, 2014
Cristallite
AWESOME!!
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on September 14, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
THIS IS AMAZING!!! WRITE MORE SOON
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on September 13, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
Love the update! 8D
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on September 12, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
YYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on September 12, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I DEMAND MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-B
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ellotherelove
Ok ok
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on September 11, 2014
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on September 11, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I need mooooooooooooooooooore
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on September 08, 2014
Fangirlforever
The way u wrote the start bit was wrong you start off with first person then when Tris meets Luke it goes into third person and after that back to first person. Good story though!
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ellotherelove
I know
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on September 06, 2014
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on September 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
How I picture the Foutris breakup:

Tris: *out of the hospital FINALLY*
Four: Tris, we have to talk.
Tris: What is it?
Four: Why do you keep throwing away your life? Risking it all? You coul've died! Think of the people you would've left behind! See More▼
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on September 11, 2014
ellotherelove
I will include it
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on September 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
If you wanna include that in the story you can :)
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on September 06, 2014
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on September 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
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on September 06, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
i love
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ellotherelove
Thanks
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on September 06, 2014
ellotherelove
Thanks
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on September 05, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AWESOME
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ellotherelove
Thanks!
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on September 04, 2014
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on September 04, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
AWESOME! I expect Percabeth action :p
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ellotherelove
There is, and there is drama surrounding that: Annabeth is dating two people people at once: Percy and Gale!
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JeweledOwl812
PHEWWW
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on October 04, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on September 05, 2014
ellotherelove
PERCABETH FOREVER!!!!! :)
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on September 05, 2014
ellotherelove
Kidding! Annabeth never dates Gale :)
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on September 05, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
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on September 05, 2014
ellotherelove
Percy breaks up with her when he finds out then Gale catches influenza and dies, meanwhile Annabeth attends his funeral and then gets back together with Percy, then
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on September 05, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
PERCABETH
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on September 05, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It doesn't work
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on September 05, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I can't picture it
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on September 05, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
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on September 04, 2014
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on September 04, 2014
Number1BratzFan
KATNISS IS IN YAY!
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ellotherelove
Yup. The third chapter is in her POV
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ellotherelove
Sorry, the fourth
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on September 04, 2014
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on September 04, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
Love it!
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ellotherelove
Thank you!
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