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has anyone read my new story (well what is already there of it) and liked it?
http://www.qfeast.com/story/3901/Fear-of-the-End
Fear of the End
Fear of the End
Ik' than kon lok' (a character I made up) faces the end of his draconian race as he knows it. The humans of the town of Farwind believe that the draconians are evil and have been stealing from their town, and have decided that they are done with all of their half dragon neighbors and wish to slaughter all of them.
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Akane
i read, and liked and rated and liked it and will read more when you add chaps!! :) i'm a faithful reader!!
on January 30, 2014
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on January 30, 2014
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Alright! Time to write another short 10 chapter book!
*3 a.m.*
Done... with chapter.....46......
*faints from sleep deprivation*
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ArtemisMoon91904
Lol so me. ;)
on July 24, 2014
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JeweledOwl812
lol
on June 17, 2014
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Dei_Dei
I usually hold about to 20-40 chapters, I'm usually a lazy writer
on March 12, 2014
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Paraboilc
stories only hold 50 chapters remember that! *for when you wake up*
on January 30, 2014
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on January 30, 2014
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Does anyone have anything to say about my stories? Such like, unclearness, typing errors, maybe even if you don't really like my stories you can give me adice on how to write better?
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Paraboilc
how are they to learn if they do not know who is speaking in the first place?
on February 02, 2014
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Celest_Stories
haha yea, I like to do that to confuse my readers, making them have to think instead of just reading words. I want my readers to find out each character's individual style and attitude. Instead of them just reading the actions and words of the characters, I want to be right beside them, using their brain to determine who is who.
on January 31, 2014
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Paraboilc
you know my only complaint, and I can ajust to it! :P and that is the way you convert who you are talking in first person as in your story CBS
on January 31, 2014
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on January 30, 2014
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First subscriber!! :D I love all these new pages!! They're such great ideas!!
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Paraboilc
I helped :D
on January 30, 2014
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Celest_Stories
I'm really glad that Qfeast really made my ideas!! I'm so happy!!
on January 29, 2014
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on January 29, 2014
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on January 29, 2014